Annnd another banger IF added to the list of things that’s gonna take a good chunk of my near future. This is already so good I’m hooked. Zero is lovely and Vincent seems like a bit of a brat. I already love them both. Does Vincent happen to be the other person in Zero’s poly Route? Cause if so I’m obsessed with them.
As someone who went through a massive drought that lasted a few years, the way you described water rationing and the desperation of the situation was insanely well written. Looking forward to seeing more :)
This is honestly so gorgeously written. The switches in perspective every time the MC goes to sleep are jarring and uncomfortable, and I mean that in the best possible way. And the whole prologue, when shit goes down? Harrowing and visceral. The way that you are fearless with uncomfortable detail really makes this the sort of ugly, raw story telling that sinks into your bones. I swear that this is all praise, despite the wording, because when I say ugly I mean that I can FEEL every moment of pain, of desperation, of wild helplessness and borderline madness. So very much looking forward to the rest! <3
The update was absolutely amazing!! Oh, how much I enjoyed meeting all the characters! ❤️❤️ I Already know I will want to romance the captive alien. 🥰 I can't wait to read more of this story! 🥹
Omg i love the story so far! Vincent is such an ass(affectionate), and im really interested in X. Though i do have a question: how exactly do you read the stats? like if its - stoic 75 friendly - does that mean you are more stoic or friendly?
This story is insanely captivating. Tho i must say. And this isn't a criticism of the storyline just a personal pov from someone thats been in an abusive relationship.
Spoiler below! If you haven't read the demo yet!
If romancing Zero means the poly route is with Vincent. I decline. Zero seems like a really broken soft person and i think everyone will want to protect him and gravitate towards him especially because of the connection he has with MC (which is crazy btw) but Vincent seems volatile, his comments about torture, his leering at MC and his behavior seems borderline abusive. I don't think I could romance someone who would still technically also be in a relationship with someone who seems abusive towards them. If it was anyone else that still liked Zero and treated them well even if themselves and our MC have no romantic relationship at all I'd feel less... iffy about it. Much rather romance a literal alien that could've probably killed my MCs mother than put myself through that trauma.
Firstly, thank you so much for sharing your perspective and opening up about your own experiences. I really hope you’re doing much better now and you’ve been able to heal from that. I’m sending you a million virtual hugs!
secondly, everything you said is very valid!!!
just so you know, and this will be revealed to MC in chapter 2 (and ppl that follow my tumblr know this too!) but Zero and V aren’t actually dating at the moment. They’re just friends and have been for years . Which is why V feels comfortable being so flirtatious with MC and all that.
Everything else though.. yea you spilled and you can totally be enemies with V while being good friends with Zero. That v type poly is definitely not for everyone and I’ve been loving all the comments being like “DEATH TO V”.
I wanted to reply to your comment in particular because it did touch me! And I wish you nothing but the best, and if it’s something you want, that you’re able to experience the genuine, loving, and safe love that you deserve. 🩵
Thank you so much for reading my story!!!! It does mean a lot to me.
I appreciate this message so much and I am thank you.. it took alooot. . But.. I'm okay now. I really appreciate the trigger warnings and honestly I am inlove with your game and story in general. I just think anything too rough? Is just a bit triggering for me for a route. So I'll just stick with Chase and earning his love which means alot to me as well being demisexual myself.
I hope my message didn't make you feel weird. I just wanted to give my perspective. I'd probably stay away from the Zero route. But everyone else seems lovely. You are doing a great job!! ♥️
I'll be the one to say it.. i truly in my heart of hearts want Vincent to die a slow painful excruciating death. I really do 🤞 This says so much about your writing abilities because I've never instantly hated a character so much in my life. Ugh why must we be stuck with him. Ew he made me feel gross. Can a character even do that? I enjoyed the update. Alot. Chase is adorable 😇 I just wanna hug Zero.. and can I hope and pray Vincent goes away? 🙄
Sorry ..... anyway the new interface and design is absolutely gorgeous. I loved the background and the page looks great. You did a great job ♥️
Well jesus... that was... alot! Bloody hell. That was great. Scary and made me so anxious for our MC. I felt soooo many emotions reading this it is good. Cannot wait to see what happens next. it's thrilling, well written and I'm intrigued as to how we can see some poor dude and whatever asshole thing that's preying on them. Also love a good slowburn romance thrown into the mix so Good Job!
Why do light and dark mode look almost the same? Can we get light background with dark text, please??? 🙏Some people can't read white text on black, because it strains their eyes.
This is so thrilling!! The author did a great job captivating and giving a sense of anticipation for me!! I can’t wait for more ⛹🏾 hopefully we get to learn more about these Aliens.
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Liked the first chapter. Good start. Like the dynamic between characters and can't wait to see how it will work as the story goes on.
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One more thing, isn't it supposed to be Moriarty?
bruuuuuh cliffhanger nooooo
Love this so far!! when will the second chapter be out?
I love the gore here 🥰
Annnd another banger IF added to the list of things that’s gonna take a good chunk of my near future. This is already so good I’m hooked. Zero is lovely and Vincent seems like a bit of a brat. I already love them both. Does Vincent happen to be the other person in Zero’s poly Route? Cause if so I’m obsessed with them.
As someone who went through a massive drought that lasted a few years, the way you described water rationing and the desperation of the situation was insanely well written. Looking forward to seeing more :)
This is honestly so gorgeously written. The switches in perspective every time the MC goes to sleep are jarring and uncomfortable, and I mean that in the best possible way. And the whole prologue, when shit goes down? Harrowing and visceral. The way that you are fearless with uncomfortable detail really makes this the sort of ugly, raw story telling that sinks into your bones. I swear that this is all praise, despite the wording, because when I say ugly I mean that I can FEEL every moment of pain, of desperation, of wild helplessness and borderline madness. So very much looking forward to the rest! <3
can someone help me at having the three gun scene reactions
The update was absolutely amazing!! Oh, how much I enjoyed meeting all the characters! ❤️❤️ I Already know I will want to romance the captive alien. 🥰 I can't wait to read more of this story! 🥹
Omg i love the story so far! Vincent is such an ass(affectionate), and im really interested in X. Though i do have a question: how exactly do you read the stats? like if its - stoic 75 friendly - does that mean you are more stoic or friendly?
hello!!! So so happy you’re liking it so far ❤️
So all stats start out at 50, and the lower the number, the closer you are to the stat on the left. The higher the number, you’re closer to the right.
Stoic 75 Friendly means that your MC is very friendly 😁
Would love to give a read but will not open... Do you know a way? TY!
Hi!! So that means you are either playing on a private page or you do not have cache/cookies allowed for the page. It’s a known issue on itch.io!!
This story is insanely captivating. Tho i must say. And this isn't a criticism of the storyline just a personal pov from someone thats been in an abusive relationship.
Spoiler below! If you haven't read the demo yet!
If romancing Zero means the poly route is with Vincent. I decline. Zero seems like a really broken soft person and i think everyone will want to protect him and gravitate towards him especially because of the connection he has with MC (which is crazy btw) but Vincent seems volatile, his comments about torture, his leering at MC and his behavior seems borderline abusive. I don't think I could romance someone who would still technically also be in a relationship with someone who seems abusive towards them. If it was anyone else that still liked Zero and treated them well even if themselves and our MC have no romantic relationship at all I'd feel less... iffy about it. Much rather romance a literal alien that could've probably killed my MCs mother than put myself through that trauma.
Hi lovebug!
Firstly, thank you so much for sharing your perspective and opening up about your own experiences. I really hope you’re doing much better now and you’ve been able to heal from that. I’m sending you a million virtual hugs!
secondly, everything you said is very valid!!!
just so you know, and this will be revealed to MC in chapter 2 (and ppl that follow my tumblr know this too!) but Zero and V aren’t actually dating at the moment. They’re just friends and have been for years . Which is why V feels comfortable being so flirtatious with MC and all that.
Everything else though.. yea you spilled and you can totally be enemies with V while being good friends with Zero. That v type poly is definitely not for everyone and I’ve been loving all the comments being like “DEATH TO V”.
I wanted to reply to your comment in particular because it did touch me! And I wish you nothing but the best, and if it’s something you want, that you’re able to experience the genuine, loving, and safe love that you deserve. 🩵
Thank you so much for reading my story!!!! It does mean a lot to me.
heeyyy
I appreciate this message so much and I am thank you.. it took alooot. . But.. I'm okay now. I really appreciate the trigger warnings and honestly I am inlove with your game and story in general. I just think anything too rough? Is just a bit triggering for me for a route. So I'll just stick with Chase and earning his love which means alot to me as well being demisexual myself.
I hope my message didn't make you feel weird. I just wanted to give my perspective. I'd probably stay away from the Zero route. But everyone else seems lovely. You are doing a great job!! ♥️
“MILF: man I love frogs.” (vincent i'm your biggest hater and at the first chance to push you from a bridge i'm not gonna hesitate
I'll be the one to say it.. i truly in my heart of hearts want Vincent to die a slow painful excruciating death. I really do 🤞 This says so much about your writing abilities because I've never instantly hated a character so much in my life. Ugh why must we be stuck with him. Ew he made me feel gross. Can a character even do that? I enjoyed the update. Alot. Chase is adorable 😇 I just wanna hug Zero.. and can I hope and pray Vincent goes away? 🙄
Sorry ..... anyway the new interface and design is absolutely gorgeous. I loved the background and the page looks great. You did a great job ♥️
Definitely interested, the characters look intriguing as much as the worldbuilding got my attention, I'll play it and make a review. ^_^
Damn ya got me addicted to yo game already, I am eager to read moar :>
Wowow! I got my pulse fluttering. That was really intense reading! Can't wait to read more of this story. 🤩👏
Well jesus... that was... alot! Bloody hell. That was great. Scary and made me so anxious for our MC. I felt soooo many emotions reading this it is good. Cannot wait to see what happens next. it's thrilling, well written and I'm intrigued as to how we can see some poor dude and whatever asshole thing that's preying on them. Also love a good slowburn romance thrown into the mix so Good Job!
I'm drawn to anything that includes survival, but this is such a wonderful start.
And I think our MC requires greater medical attention 😭.
I'm excited for more, and dear author, you killed it..
so good... i need more
OMFG THE "THE HAUNTING OF HILL HOUSE" RWEFERENCE
Why do light and dark mode look almost the same? Can we get light background with dark text, please??? 🙏Some people can't read white text on black, because it strains their eyes.
hi sunshine, that was an error on my end. it should be fixed now!
Brilliant, can't wait for more. Haven't seen an alien invasion IF, so I'm glad to have found yours.
hi lovely! you're so kind!!! so so glad you're liking it to far <3
This is so thrilling!! The author did a great job captivating and giving a sense of anticipation for me!! I can’t wait for more ⛹🏾 hopefully we get to learn more about these Aliens.
AHHHH thank you so much, sunshine! I'm so happy you enjoyed the prologue. <3